I always imagined myself living in New York with some high paying job, preferably in the fashion and beauty industry, penthouse living, skinny and with the best extensions money can buy, in short shallow but luxurious.The reality is my life is a far cry from that. I still dream of that sometimes and lead me into choosing Discovering Me as the topic of my blog.
I do not intend to bore you with recipes and challenges of motherhood...instead my goal is to try and make myself and maybe other people understand and accept that what we plan for our lives, most times, is not what will be.
How can we as humans come to terms? I do not know, but after sixteen weeks I may have a better idea.Follow my journey.
You take quite a jump here. We find out what you thought you wanted: the NYC single woman lifestyle. But we don't learn anything about your current reality other than you're a mom. This could be intriguing for readers if it was a setup with a follow-through in the post, but instead it just feels incomplete.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if you want to rethink your title. I get the cliche is what you wanted, but don't all kids dream in cliche?
I really like your topic and I think it will be interesting to see how it broadens in the next 16 weeks but I also think you should add more about your personal life. Other than that, it is a very good introductory blog.
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